A statement on the topic of bureaucracy is a disease of our speech. What is stationery in copywriting

When analyzing errors caused by the unjustified use of stylistically colored vocabulary, special attention should be paid to words related to the official business style. The elements of the official business style, introduced into a stylistically alien context for them, are called clericalisms. It should be remembered that these speech means are called clericalisms only when they are used in speech that is not bound by the norms of the official business style.

Stamps are hackneyed expressions with faded lexical meaning and worn out expressiveness. Stamps are words, phrases and even whole sentences that arise as new, stylistically expressive speech means, but as a result of too frequent use lose their original imagery. Example: A forest of hands rose during the vote. A variety of stamps are universal words. These are words that are used in the most general and indefinite meanings: question, task, raise, provide and so on. Usually, universal words are accompanied by stencil pendants: work - everyday, level - high, support - hot... Numerous journalistic cliches ( toilers of the fields, a city on the Volga), literary ( exciting image, angry protest)

Speech cliches are becoming widespread words and expressions with erased semantics and faded emotional coloring. So, in a variety of contexts, the expression begins to be used in a figurative meaning to get a residence permit (Each ball that flies into the net of the goal receives a permanent residence in the tables; Petrovsky's muse has a permanent residence in the hearts; Aphrodite entered the permanent exhibition of the museum - now she is registered in our city ).

Any frequently repeated speech means can become a stamp, for example, stereotyped metaphors, definitions that have lost their figurative power due to constant reference to them, even hackneyed rhymes (tears are roses). However, in practical stylistics, the term "speech stamp" has received a narrower meaning: this is the name for stereotypical expressions that have a clerical coloration.

Among the speech cliches that have arisen as a result of the influence of the official business style on other styles, one can distinguish, first of all, stereotyped turns of speech: at this stage, in a given period of time, for today, he emphasized with all his sharpness, etc. As a rule, they do not add anything to the content of the statement, but only clog the speech: At this time, a difficult situation has developed with the elimination of debts to supplier enterprises; At present, the payment of wages to miners has been taken under unremitting control; At this stage, the spawn of the crucian carp goes well, etc. Excluding the highlighted words will not change anything in the information.

Speech stamps also include universal words that are used in a variety of, often too broad, indefinite meanings (question, event, series, conduct, unfold, separate, specific, etc.). For example, a noun question, acting as a universal word, never indicates what is being asked (Nutrition issues in the first 10-12 days are especially important; Issues of timely collection of taxes from enterprises and commercial structures deserve great attention). In such cases, it can be painlessly excluded from the text (compare: Nutrition in the first 10-12 days is especially important; It is necessary to collect taxes from enterprises and commercial structures in a timely manner).

The word to appear as universal is also often superfluous; This can be seen by comparing two versions of sentences from newspaper articles:

The unjustified use of linking verbs is one of the most common stylistic flaws in the specialized literature. However, this does not mean that a ban should be imposed on linking verbs.

Speech stamps include paired words, or satellite words; the use of one of them necessarily prompts the use of the other (compare: the event is held, the scope is wide, the criticism is sharp, the problem is unresolved, urgent, etc.). The definitions in these pairs are lexically incomplete, they generate speech redundancy.

Speech cliches, relieving the speaker of the need to look for the necessary, exact words, deprive speech of concreteness. For example: The current season was held at a high organizational level - this proposal can be inserted into the report on hay harvesting, sports competitions, preparation of housing stock for winter, and grape harvest ...

The set of speech stamps changes over the years: some are gradually forgotten, others become "fashionable", so it is impossible to list and describe all the cases of their use. It is important to understand the essence of this phenomenon and prevent the emergence and spread of cliches.

Language standards should be distinguished from speech stamps. Linguistic standards are called ready-made, reproducible in speech means of expression used in journalistic style. Unlike the cliche, "the standard ... does not evoke a negative attitude, since it has clear semantics and expresses thought sparingly, contributing to the speed of information transfer." The language standards include, for example, such combinations that have become stable: Public sector employees, employment services, international humanitarian aid, commercial structures, law enforcement agencies, branches of the Russian government, according to informed sources, - phrases such as household service (food, health , rest, etc.). These speech units are widely used by journalists, since it is impossible in each specific case to invent new means of expression.

Stationery- verbal cliches and stereotyped expressions, grammatical forms and constructions inherent in the official business style of writing and the "bureaucratic" version of oral speech, a special "office" (K. Chukovsky's definition), jargon of officials, "officials". These are, for example, "incoming" and "outgoing" (papers, document numbers), "entrust the execution of the decision (report)", "provide assistance", "provide assistance" (instead of "help", "assist"), "please consider "," work out the issue ( solution) "," use (resource, people, departments, etc.) "," in accordance with the decision "," according to the decision "(instead of" by decision "), etc. phenomenon; they make it easier to compose, read and, ultimately, pass papers "on authorities". K. - idiomatic expressions of a special kind, among them many archaic, inherited by the modern bureaucracy from the predecessors of the XIX century. K. can be considered as result linguistic "conservation of energy" - with the help of stamps and templates, writing and speaking is much easier and faster than using bright, expressive, artistic speech and language means.

The elements of the official business style, introduced into a stylistically alien context for them, are called clericalisms. It should be remembered that these speech means are called clericalisms only when they are used in speech that is not bound by the norms of the official business style.

Lexical and phraseological clericalisms include words and phrases that have a typical color for the official business style (the presence, in the absence, in order to avoid, to live, withdraw, the above, takes place, etc.). Their use makes speech inexpressive (If there is a desire, a lot can be done to improve the working conditions of workers; Currently, there is an understaffing of teaching staff).

As a rule, you can find many options for expressing thoughts, avoiding bureaucratic issues. For example, why should a journalist write: There is a negative side in the activity of an enterprise in marriage, if one can say: It is bad when an enterprise produces a marriage; Marriage is unacceptable in work; Marriage is a great evil that must be fought; It is necessary to prevent defects in production; We must finally stop producing defective products !; You can't put up with marriage! A simple and specific formulation has a stronger impact on the reader.

The clerical coloring of speech is often given by verbal nouns formed with the help of the suffixes -ni-, -ani-, etc. (identifying, finding, taking, inflating, closing) and non-existent (sewing, hijacking, time off). Their clerical shade is aggravated by the prefixes not-, under- (non-detection, underperformance). Russian writers often parodied the syllable, "decorated" with such bureaucracy [The case of gnawing a plan thereof with mice (Hertz.); The case of the entry and breaking of glass by a crow (Pis.); Announcing to the widow Vanina that she did not stick the sixty-kopeck mark ... (Ch.)].

Verbal nouns do not have categories of tense, type, mood, voice, person. This narrows their expressive possibilities in comparison with verbs. For example, such a proposal is devoid of accuracy: From the head of the farm V.I. The slime was negligent in milking and feeding the cows. One might think that the head of the farm did not milk and feed the cows well, but the author only wanted to say that the head of the farm, V.I. Shlyk did nothing to facilitate the work of the milkmaids, to prepare feed for the livestock. The inability to express the meaning of the voice with a verbal noun can lead to an ambiguity of the construction such as the professor's statement (does the professor approve or is he approved?), I love singing (I like to sing or listen when they sing?).

In sentences with verbal nouns, the predicate is often expressed in a passive participle or reflexive verb, this deprives the action of activity and enhances the clerical coloring of speech

However, not all verbal nouns in the Russian language belong to the official business vocabulary, they are diverse in stylistic coloring, which largely depends on the peculiarities of their lexical meaning and word formation. Verbal nouns with the meaning of a person (teacher, self-taught, confusion, bully), many nouns with the meaning of action (running, crying, playing, washing, shooting, bombing) have nothing to do with clericalism.

Verbal nouns with book suffixes can be divided into two groups. Some are stylistically neutral (meaning, name, excitement), for many of them -nye changed into -nye, and they began to denote not an action, but its result (compare: baking pies - sweet cookies, cooking cherries - cherry jam). Others retain a close connection with verbs, acting as abstract names for actions, processes (acceptance, non-identification, non-admission). It is precisely such nouns that are most often inherent in clerical coloration, only those who have received a strict terminological meaning in the language (drilling, spelling, adjoining) do not have it.

The use of clericalisms of this type is associated with the so-called "splitting of the predicate", i.e. replacing a simple verbal predicate with a combination of a verbal noun with an auxiliary verb having a weakened lexical meaning (instead of complicating it, it leads to complication). So, they write: This leads to complication, confusion of accounting and an increase in costs, and it is better to write: This complicates and confuses accounting, increases costs.

However, in the stylistic assessment of this phenomenon, one should not go to the extreme, rejecting any cases of using verb-nominal combinations instead of verbs. In book styles, the following combinations are often used: took part instead of participated, gave an instruction instead of indicated, etc. In the official business style, verb-nominal combinations have been fixed to declare gratitude, accept for execution, impose a penalty (in these cases, the verbs to thank, execute, collect are inappropriate), etc. The scientific style uses terminological combinations such as visual fatigue, self-regulation, transplantation, etc. In a journalistic style, expressions function: workers went on strike, there were clashes with the police, an attempt was made on the minister's life, etc. In such cases, verbal nouns cannot be dispensed with and there is no reason to consider them clerical.

The use of verbal-nominal combinations sometimes even creates conditions for speech expression. For example, the combination to take an active part is more capacious in meaning than the verb to participate. The definition of a noun allows you to give the verb-nominal combination an exact terminological meaning (compare: help - provide emergency medical care). The use of a verb-nominal combination instead of a verb can also contribute to the elimination of the lexical polysemy of verbs (compare: give a beep - hum). The preference for such verb-nominal combinations of verbs, of course, is beyond doubt; their use does not harm the style, but, on the contrary, makes speech more effective.

In other cases, the use of a verbal-nominal combination brings a clerical coloring to the sentence. Let's compare two types of syntactic constructions - with a verb-nominal combination and with a verb:

As you can see, the use of a turnover with verbal nouns (instead of a simple predicate) in such cases is inappropriate - it generates verbosity and burdens the syllable.

The influence of the official business style is often explained by the unjustified use of aboriginal pretexts: along the line, in the context, in part, in the case, in force, for the purpose, in the region, in the plan, at the level, at the expense, etc. distribution in book styles, and under certain conditions their use is stylistically justified. However, infatuation with them often damages the presentation, making the syllable heavier and giving it a clerical color. This is partly due to the fact that abusive prepositions usually require the use of verbal nouns, which leads to stringing of cases. For example: By improving the organization of paying off salary and pension arrears, improving the culture of customer service, turnover in state and commercial stores should increase - the accumulation of verbal nouns, many identical case forms made the proposal heavy and cumbersome. To correct the text, it is necessary to exclude the abbreviated preposition from it, if possible, replace the verbal nouns with verbs. Let's assume the following editing option: To increase the turnover in state and commercial stores, you need to pay salaries on time and not delay the pension of citizens, as well as improve the culture of customer service.

Some authors use abbreviated prepositions automatically, without thinking about their meaning, which is partly still preserved in them. For example: Due to the lack of materials, construction has been suspended (as if someone had foreseen that there would be no materials, and therefore the construction was suspended). Incorrect use of abusive prepositions often leads to illogical statements.

The exclusion of abbreviated prepositions from the text, as we can see, eliminates verbosity, helps to express a thought more concretely and stylistically correctly.

As weed words most often they are:

particles(index here summarizing Well, modal perhaps, affirmative So, interrogative Yes emotionally expressive simple and straightforward and comparative as if), modal words (of course, probably, probably, it seems), introductory units (in general, in general, in principle, let's say, so, in short, for example, you understand, say so, listen, in fact, therefore, so to speak) and pronouns(demonstrative pronoun this is, a combination of demonstrative and attributive pronouns is the same, a combination of an interrogative pronoun what are the particles, combination of pronominal adverb and subject-personal pronoun how is it, pronominal adverb there).
Examples:
"Here I came to you ... here ... but you ... here ... I did not find" (uch-to the 7th grade).
"So, when we were on an excursion, well, this ... now ... when we went down to the river ... here ... and this ... we saw a beaver ..." (uch-to class 7).
"In the village ... here ... every year there are more and more ... here ... strangers. I come ... here ... and I hardly know anyone ... here" (woman, 26 years old) ...
"Well, let's say the language is divided into styles. Well, let's say, there are five styles of language" (student of philological faculty).

19. Richness of speech. Word formation as a source of speech wealth.

Richness of speech- a set of linguistic means (lexical, grammatical, stylistic), which a separate person owns and skillfully uses in accordance with the situation. The richness of speech is determined by a person's ability to express the same thought, the same grammatical meaning in different ways.
The richness of speech is associated with a variety of used speaking means of expressing thoughts, synonyms, ways of constructing utterances, organizing the text.
To achieve this quality, you need to replenish your vocabulary by reading literature, pay attention to the grammatical and stylistic features of the texts being read, ponder the shades of the meanings of words, notice cliches, hackneyed phrases.

The level of speech culture depends not only on knowledge of the norms of the literary language, the laws of logic and strict adherence to them, but also on the possession of his wealth, the ability to use them in the process of communication.

The Russian language is rightfully called one of the richest and most developed languages in the world. Its wealth is in the innumerable stock of vocabulary and phraseology, in the semantic richness of the dictionary, in the limitless possibilities of phonetics, word formation and word combination, in the variety of lexical, phraseological and grammatical synonyms and variants, syntactic constructions and intonations. All this allows you to express the subtlest semantic and emotional shades. "There is nothing like that in the world, in the life around us and in our consciousness," says K.G. Paustovsky, "that could not be conveyed by the Russian word: the sound of music, and ... the brilliance of colors, and the noise of rain, and the fabulousness of dreams, and the heavy thunder of a thunderstorm, and childish babble, and the mournful rumble of the surf, and anger, and great joy, and the sorrow of loss, and the jubilation of victory. "

The richness of an individual's speech is determined by what arsenal of linguistic means he possesses and how skillfully, in accordance with the content, topic and task of the utterance, he uses them in a specific situation. Speech is considered the richer, the more widely various means and ways of expressing the same thought, the same grammatical meaning are used in it, the less often it is repeated without a special communicative task, unintentionally the same linguistic unit.

In this article we will talk about such a linguistic concept as "clericalism". Examples, basic properties and scope of this will be considered by us in particular detail.

In Russian, bureaucracy is referred to such a language group as speech stamps. Therefore, let's figure out for a start what this phenomenon is.

What are speech stamps

Let's start by looking at the most common mistakes that are made in both writing and communication.

Stamps and bureaucrats (examples of which will be presented below) are closely related. More precisely, the linguistic phenomenon we are considering is one of the types of stamps (this concept names such words and expressions that are often used, due to which they have lost their meaning). Therefore, such constructions simply overload the speech of the speaker and are considered redundant.

Stamps are words and phrases that are often used in speech. Usually such linguistic phenomena do not have any specificity. For example, the phrase "the meeting was at the highest level" is used instead of giving a detailed account of the event.

In russian language? Examples of

In the Russian language, there are a number of words, the use of which is considered appropriate only in a specific one. These words include clericalism. It is customary to refer to this term as words, grammatical structures and forms, as well as word combinations, the use of which is assigned in the literary language to the official business style. For example: to solicit, it is necessary, activities that do not pursue the goal of making a profit, to carry out control etc.

Signs of clericalism

Now let's define the signs of such words and consider examples.

Stationery is the words of the official business style, however, besides this, they have a number of purely linguistic features. Among them are:

The use of non-fixative (hijacking, sewing, day off); suffix (taking, revealing, bloating, finding).
Replacement of a compound nominal predicate of a simple verb (splitting of the predicate). For example: show desire- instead of wish, make a decision- instead of decide to help- instead of to help.
The use of abominable prepositions. For example: in part, along the line, in force, in the address, in the context, in the region, at the expense, in the plan, in the case, at the level.
Stringing of cases, usually genitive. For example, conditions necessary to raise the level of culture of the population of the region.
Replacing active revolutions with passive ones. For example, active turnover we installed- to passive the establishment was carried out by us.

Why is it forbidden to abuse clericalism?

Stationery and speech stamps (examples confirm this), often used in speech, lead to the fact that it loses its imagery, expressiveness, laconicism, individuality. As a result, the following shortcomings arise:

For example: after short-term precipitation fell in the form of rain, a rainbow shone over the reservoir in all its glory.
The ambiguity that verbal nouns generate. For example, the phrase “professor's statement” can be understood both as “professors assert” and as “professor asserts”.
Verbosity, weighting of speech. For example: due to the improvement in the level of service, the turnover in commercial and state stores should significantly increase.

Clericalism, the examples of which we have presented, deprives speech of imagery, expressiveness, and persuasiveness. Because they are frequently used expressions with erased lexical meaning, tarnished expressiveness.

Usually journalists tend to use stamps. Therefore, in the journalistic style, such expressions are especially common.

What words refer to clericalism

It looks natural only in business speech clericalism. Examples of their use indicate that very often these words are used in other styles of speech, which is considered a gross stylistic mistake. In order to prevent such an oversight, you need to know exactly what words refer to bureaucracy.

So, bureaucracy can be characterized by:

Archaic solemnity: named, the aforementioned, collect, the bearer of this, it is necessary, to demand, as such.
At the same time, bureaucracy can be everyday businesslike: to speak(in meaning to discuss), hear, progress, puzzle, specifics, developments.
Nouns formed from verbs with the following suffixes give speech an official business coloration: - ut, -at, -ani, -ni: beginning, taking, finding; non-fixative: time off, hijacking, sewing, hiring, supervision; prefixed words under-, not-: non-detection, non-detection, under-fulfillment, non-admission.
In addition, a number of nouns, participles, adverbs, linking verbs and adjectives are strictly related to the business sphere of communication. For example: party, customer, client, principal, owner, person, memo, victim, vacant, outgoing, immediately, gratuitously, be, be, be.
A number of official words are distinguished by their official business coloration: to the address, at the expense, on the basis of and so on. For example: according to the agreement, in connection with the termination of the agreement, in case of refusal to comply with the agreement, as a result of research etc.
Such turnovers include the following compound names: food products, law enforcement agencies, vehicle, budgetary sphere, diplomatic relations.

When is it appropriate to use the term "clericalism"

Stationery (we examined examples of words in detail above), according to the laws of the literary language, should be used only in an official business style. Then these phrases do not stand out against the background of the text.

The very same term "clericalism" is appropriate to use only in those cases when such words and phrases are used in someone else's style. Then speech acquires an inexpressive, official character, loses its emotionality, liveliness, naturalness and simplicity.

Stationery as a stylistic device

But clericalism is not always attributed to speech shortcomings. Examples from fiction show that often such words and phrases are used as a stylistic device. For example, for the speech characteristics of the hero.

Writers often use stationery to create a humorous effect. For example, Zoshchenko, Chekhov, Saltykov-Shchedrin, Ilf and Petrov. For example, in Saltykov-Shchedrin - “... it is forbidden to gouge out the eye, take away the head, bite off the nose”; in Chekhov, "the killing took place due to drowning."

Stationery (we examined examples of words in some detail) in Russia reached the greatest distribution during the period of stagnation, when they penetrated into all spheres of speech, including even everyday speech. This example once again confirms the idea that the language is a reflection of all the changes that are taking place in the country and society.

Psychology of the editor

Clericalisms, like the previous lexical categories, are included in the vocabulary of limited use (used mainly in an official business style) and therefore are completely inappropriate, for example, in lively colloquial speech, because they deaden, discolor it, make it stereotyped and boring. Many clerical words and phrases have long lost the expressiveness of their original meaning and have become stamps.

The task... Select one of the stamp definitions:

1. Stamp - evidence of the scarcity of thought and poverty of language, depriving the statement of simplicity, brightness and originality.

2. (On the question of the use of foreign words):

A stamp is an attribute of defective intelligence and a deficit of vocabulary, annulling the expressiveness and individuality of the phrase.

3. A stamp is an expression that has lost the character of necessity, clarity and individuality of the style of presentation, revealing the lack of activity along the line of thought processes due to negative indicators in the development of the phenomena of the lexical richness of the language and in strengthening the erudition of the speaker's personality.

It is noteworthy that in the first textbook "Practical stylistics of the modern Russian language" V.A. Mamonov and D.E. Rosenthal, published in 1957, the bureaucracy is defined as “Words and phrases characteristic of the language and style of pre-revolutionary government institutions” (p. 32) - a clearly tendentious assessment of a linguistic fact from an ideological standpoint. As if refuting this delusion, B. Timofeev notes that “such a lifeless, and sometimes frankly archaic language has penetrated into our office work from the first years of the revolution,” and recalls how in those years they wrote in certificates and mandates: “This is given to such a is that he really is the person who calls himself, that signature and is certified by the application of the seal ”(see 80, p.160).

Unfortunately, this ugliness of our speech lives on and is even progressing today, since the fight against it is not given sufficient attention at school and university.

L.I. Skvortsov identifies 4 types of stamps:

1. Stable phrases like “get involved in the struggle (for something)”, “take the necessary measures”, “show initiative”, “achievements and successes”, “play a role” and “have a meaning”, “in these conditions”, “To keep in sight”, “to take place”, “it is difficult to overestimate”, “it is impossible not to notice”, “in the spotlight”, “for today”, etc.

3. The so-called "new" prepositions, turns of the type "in business", "in the direction", "on the issue", "in connection" (with something) or "in this connection", "in the field", "in force "," for purposes "," in part "," along the line "," in the light "," in the context ".

4. The deliberate, most often inappropriate use of such bookish words as “worker” and “toiler”, “happened”, “to have”, “to appear”, “conquest”, “epicenter”, “forum”, “to link” and “ agree ”,“ incident ”,“ given ”,“ implement ”and“ implement ”and much more (see 76, pp. 29-30).

Stamps exist both at the level of linguistic units and at the level of the text. A similar stamped text was satirically depicted in the novel "The Twelve Chairs" by I. Ilf and E. Petrov when describing the solemn meeting in Stargorod on the occasion of the opening of the tram line:

Comrade Gavrilin, chairman of the Starkomkhoz, began his speech well and simply.

“To build a tram,” he said, “is not to buy an eshaka.

A loud laugh from Ostap Bender was suddenly heard in the crowd. He appreciated this phrase. Approved by the reception, Gavrilin, himself not understanding why, suddenly started talking about the international situation. He tried several times to put his report on the tram rails, but with horror he noticed that he could not do it. Words by themselves, against the will of the speaker, turned out to be some kind of international. After Chamberlain, to whom Gavrilin devoted half an hour, the American Senator Bora entered the international arena. The crowd became limp ... The inflamed Gavrilin spoke ill of the Romanian boyars and went over to Mussolini. And only towards the end of his speech, he overcame his second international nature and spoke with good business words:

- And I think so, comrades, that this tram, which will now leave the depot, thanks to whom has it been released? Of course, comrades, thanks to you, thanks to all the workers who really did not work for fear, but, comrades, for conscience. And also, comrades, thanks to an honest Soviet specialist, chief engineer Treukhov. Thanks to him too! ..

They began to look for Treukhov, but did not find him. The representative of the Oil Center, who had been burning for a long time, squeezed to the railing of the rostrum, waved his hand and spoke loudly ... about the international situation!

Finally, in the evening, Treukhov was found and taken to the podium:

- The floor is given to the chief engineer, Comrade Treukhov! - Gavrilin announced happily. - Well, tell me, otherwise I was not saying that at all, - he added in a whisper.

Treukhov wanted to say a lot. And about subbotniks, and about hard work, about everything that has been done and what else can be done. And you can do a lot: you can free the city from the contagious import market, build covered glass buildings, you can build a permanent bridge instead of the temporary one that is annually demolished by ice drift, you can finally carry out the project of building a huge slaughterhouse.

Treukhov opened his mouth and, stammering, spoke:

- Comrades! The international position of our state ...

A.F. Pisemsky, A.I. Herzen, A.P. Chekhov, and then K.I. Chukovsky sharply criticized the abuse of clerical and bureaucratic turns. For example, A.F. Pisemsky ridicules the bureaucratic addiction to verbal nouns and the instrumental case of the subject of action in a parody phrase Crow flying in and breaking glass... A.I. Herzen, reproducing the name of the "important" government paper: "The case of the loss of no one knows where the house of the volost government and the gnawing of the plan thereof with mice."... But at the same time, the writers themselves did not exclude such linguistic means from literary works - in the event that these elements fulfill the function known to us as a negative speech characteristic of the character. For example, passing in the story "Anna on the Neck" the speech of a bureaucrat, A.P. Chekhov makes the following author's remark: "And long periods dragged on: to the extent, proceeding from that position, in view of what has just been said." K. Paustovsky continued this satirical tradition in the story "Crushed Sugar" ("He spoke tongue-tiedly, like a mediocre business executive:" limit travel costs "," make a photo "," organize a snack "," cut off the norms along the timber rafting line ") and article "Living and Dead":

In one of the Central Russian villages where I had to live, the chairman of the village council was a certain Petin - a small, sweet, always agitated person. Petin's conversation in everyday life was full of apt words, comparisons, jokes, humor. But as soon as he went up to the podium for the next lecture and drink at the same time - following the example of big speakers - a glass of yellowish boiled water, as he transformed and, holding on to an unusual tie, like an anchor of salvation, began his speech something like this:

- What do we have today in terms of the further development of the dairy product line and the elimination of its backlog in terms of milk yield?

And now an intelligent and cheerful man, stretched out and holding his hands at the seams, carried for two hours a murderous nonsense in an unknown barbaric language, because only our most cruel enemy could call this language Russian.

Paustovsky's article partly touches on the psychological reasons for the emergence of a cliche, which, according to L.I. Skvortsov, a lot. “This is both the fear of the audience, and the danger of saying something“ wrong ”, wrong, and internal uncertainty from insufficient preparation, and a kind of striving for“ smoothness ”of speech at all costs” (76, p. 28). However, there are actually linguistic reasons for the stereotyped and clichéd speech. And the main one is that it is impossible to constantly talk about new things and express yourself in an original way. Such a speech would look mannered, it would be difficult to listen and understand. In a normal communication situation, we always prepare the unfamiliar by referring to the already known. In the speech of an experienced and skillful speaker, "known" and "new" for the listener should be balanced

K.I. Chukovsky, speaking at the Second All-Union Congress of Writers, very caustically and categorically spoke about the power of stencils and templates in literary works:

Due to some sad delusion, many authors of literary books and articles believe that the more often they use ... official phrases, the more scientific their books, dissertations, articles will be ... If you ... wrote "reflect", you need to add "brightly" ... If "Protest", then "sharp", if satire, then "angry and sharp". A dozen and a half such ready-made formulas are often imposed on students at school ... I, for example, know a literature textbook for the 9th grade, which said that such and such a writer creates such and such “bright” images, and such and such “bright "Reflects such and such a psyche, and such and such" brightly "had such and such qualities, and such and such a" brightly "depicted such and such character, and such and such in itself is a" bright "exponent of something ... Is it any wonder that already on the fifth page this "brightness" begins to be felt as "dullness", and on the sixth page it finally goes out, and we remain in darkness, for who does not feel that behind this mechanically repeated and therefore deadly epithet lies the indifference of lazy minds , not even trying to say their own, fresh, heart-warming word about the wonderful Russian writers ...

The writer, who has always remained a true patriot and connoisseur of the language, rings the alarm, calling on all persecutors of borrowings, jargon and barbarism, all obvious and imaginary fighters for the purity of their native speech, to switch their attention to a more dangerous ailment, which has long and gravely been ill with the Russian language, and diagnoses this pathology like this:

Much more serious is that serious illness, from which, according to the observation of many, our colloquial and literary speech has not yet been eliminated. This disease is a thousand times more pernicious than any jargon, since it can lead - and it does! - our modern speech to thinness, sclerosis and frailty.

The name of the disease is clerical (I give this disease such a name after the model of colitis, diphtheria, meningitis).

We must rise to the fight against this protracted, debilitating and intractable ailment with united forces - we are all who cherish the greatest heritage of Russian folk culture, our wise, expressive, gei-picturesque language (97, p. 152).

The author of the book "Alive as Life" gives many examples of inappropriate use of bureaucrats, including stamped phrases such as "What activities are taking you for bite enhancement? " (in the address of a fisherman to a neighbor), “Do not litter the sidewalks public use waste smoking process"," Shame on the disruptors of the campaign for the struggle to fulfill the plan of organizing the campaign to fight for the sweeping of the streets! "; pseudoscientific formulations “The burial belonged to a subject oriented with his skull to the east” (this is how the archaeologist set out this idea in pursuit of imaginary scientificity, instead of writing: “In the burial mound I excavated lay the deceased with his head to the east”) or “Concerning the nature of the change in the erosion and the geomorphological structure of the region of the possible Khorsko-Anyui bifurcation "(instead of the simple and clear title of the scientific article" The shape of the surface of the upper reaches of the Anyui River "); shabby stencils "We wish you new achievements in work", "We wish you creative luck and success ...", "Death snatched from our ranks ..." sticks), "Hosiery", "Souvenir products", "Soap detergents", "green array" (instead of Forest).

Chukovsky appropriately quotes V.G. Kostomarov, who exposes the pleonasticity of some well-worn epithets:

We often congratulate on achieved successes, correct available errors, consider received suggestions get hold of real skill, discussing the results carried out elections, warmly applauded invited guests, etc., although no one would have thought of congratulating them on the successes that they did not achieve, correcting mistakes that did not exist, considering proposals not received, mastering fake skills, discussing the results of canceled elections, or applauding guests who were forgotten to invite.

The just indignation of K.I. Chukovsky is caused by cliches and gross speech errors that arise as a result of the clericalization of linguistic consciousness and are often found in literary works: “The atmosphere in which the poet's childhood passed, it is impossible not to admit very unfavorable "," The period of stagnation and decline did not go on the line of absence talented performers "," It is necessary to eliminate the lag on the front of misunderstanding of satire», « Followed by behind this item followed paragraph next content, afterwards withdrawn "(obvious multiple tautology)," We were convinced that the knowledge of the dynamics of the image of Andrei Bolkonsky by the students of the experimental class turned out to be ... " the house of the nephew of the coachman's wife the doctor's brother) and p.

As if supplementing Chukovsky's observations, B. Timofeev sneers at the stamped speech of some orators:

... he will say not “today”, but “for today”, not “necessary”, but “must”, not “also”, but “equal”, not “in relation”, but “along the line,” not “ask ", But" to sharpen the question "or" to raise the question with all its acuteness. "

This bureaucratic language loves cumbersome, compound, artificial words such as "cargo capacity", "rat-tightness", "underdispersion", the words "provide", "at the expense", "agree", ... "keep within", "real", etc. .d. And his true favorites are the verbal forms “is” and “is” and the expression “to lower the directive” (80, p. 160).

In modern language, some words can be distinguished, the semantic fields of which provoke the appearance of cliches, for example: “a question - on a question ...” (often where there is no question); "Line - along the line ..." hence the "line" school, educational, physical education, use, service ", etc .; Wed "Business" (in various meanings), "moment" or "front" (in relation to a long process). You need to be extremely careful when using such cliché-dangerous words in your speech and try to avoid stereotypes when constructing an utterance, although this is sometimes very difficult, since we all think and speak mainly in ready-made forms. Therefore, we can only talk about the fact that this form is not evaluated by you and those around you, as beaten and colorless (i.e., as a stamp).

Introduction

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An important part of literary activity is stylistics. Even the most interesting piece of literature can alienate the reader with poor writing style. One of the types of stylistic "deformities" is the office. What is he like?

In the age of bureaucracy and business communication, many are "infected" with the official style of speech, and they use it under the most inappropriate circumstances. Think of your friends. People who try to appear more serious resort to business phrases and special terms, often of foreign origin.

This defect of speech is called clerical. This term was coined by K.I. Chukovsky. Few people know that he was not only a brilliant writer, but an equally gifted linguist. As a true philologist, he loved his native language and tried to identify speech diseases in order to be able to cure them.

As you can understand, bureaucracy is an inappropriate and incorrect use of business speech, the use of speech stamps of the official language. So, we often hear phrases like "I made an assumption" instead of the simple phrase "I assumed." People often replace Russian words with foreign ones, for example "electorate" instead of "voters".

All this complicates speech, makes it ugly and angular. The use of bureaucratic inarticulateness is often found in journalism and even in modern literature. Poorly navigating in literary speech, people use the cliches of business communication. This dries up speech, distracts from the meaning of what is written.

In view of this, the topic of our research was "The problem of clericality in modern public speech."

The fundamental problem of our research was the use of clerical writing in journalism, public speaking, both orally and in writing, about the status and features of which there is still no consensus.

The purpose of the research is to study the problem of bureaucracy in modern speech.

The object of research is the concept of bureaucracy.

The subject of the research is the use of clerical writing in public speech.

The purpose of the study is to determine the specifics of the use of clerical letters in modern speech.

To achieve the goal of our research, we were assigned the following tasks:

consider the history of the study of bureaucracy and bureaucracy;

to investigate the features of speech stamps and clericalisms;

to conduct a practical analysis of the use of clericalisms in public speech.

Study structure. The work consists of an introduction, two chapters - theoretical and practical, a conclusion, a list of used literature.

Chapter 1. History of the study of bureaucracy and bureaucracy

1.1Problems of research of clericalisms

Many people think that the literary language is the language of fiction. However, this understanding of the term is incorrect.

Literary language is the language of culture; it is the language of cultured people. Modern Russian literary language fulfills both of these purposes. But this is not always the case. For example, in the 17th century. in Russia, the language of written culture was mainly Church Slavonic, and the living language of cultured people, the means of their everyday communication, was Russian.

Artistic works and scientific works are created in the Russian literary language; it is the language of theater, schools, newspapers and magazines, radio and television. At the same time, it is spoken in the family, at work, with friends, in public places. The fact that both functions are performed by the same language enriches the culture; it is built with the help of a living, dynamic means of communication, capable of conveying the newest, newly emerging meanings, and conveys their very dynamics, helps them to arise and form. And everyday speech benefits from this: the very everyday communication between people becomes a phenomenon of national culture. The literary language is lovingly protected from anything that can harm it.

In different eras, the dangers that threaten the language are different. In the 20s and 90s of the twentieth century, there was an influx of borrowed words (moreover, borrowed unnecessarily), slang vocabulary, vernacular, i.e. abnormal, phenomena in the field of pronunciation and grammar.

In the 30s of the twentieth century, many cultural figures fought against excessive influence on the literary language of dialects, against the influx of slang vocabulary. Maxim Gorky wrote: "The speech whims of our country are very diverse. The task of serious writers is to weed out, select from this chaos the most accurate, capacious, sonorous words, and not to get carried away with rubbish like such meaningless words as poddykivat, baste, shrink and etc. " This danger was overcome in the 30s precisely because writers, teachers, journalists, scientists fought against it.

In our time, one of the dangers for literary speech (and, ultimately, for language) is the influence on everyday, journalistic, even artistic speech of book stamps, especially stamps of the official business style. K.I. Chukovsky.

In many works of the Soviet and post-Soviet times, clerical is understood as “Soviet language”, “totalitarian language”, “Newspeak”. These studies draw a parallel between the spread of clerical speech beyond the official business style and the ideology of the Soviet state. In other works, the office is studied in the orthological aspect. It is interpreted as the use of linguistic means of a business style in inappropriate communication conditions. In this aspect, the spread of bureaucracy can be explained by the development of the literary language of mass culture and the dominance in society of incompletely functional and middle-literary types of speech culture, a distinctive feature of which is "possession of only one - maximum two functional styles apart from colloquial speech."

Thus, there are two understandings of the bureaucracy. In the first case, it is considered in the historical and cultural plane, in the second - as an aspect of the culture of speech.

The problem of the functioning of the office in the conditions of the modern speech situation remains relevant. According to some scholars, the cliches of official speech are gradually becoming a thing of the past, and speech becomes free. In the opinion of others, bureaucracy cannot be considered a phenomenon of only the Soviet totalitarian language. One of the reasons for the existence of the office today is the need for the official authorities to veiledly present any information.

HELL. Vasiliev and E.A. Zemskaya note that bureaucracy is inherent not only in totalitarian societies, it also exists in "democratic" states and performs the functions of political correctness and management, manipulating the mass audience.

In our opinion, bureaucracy is still quite common among native speakers of the Russian language. It is not as noticeable as in the Soviet era, because it is combined with foreign-style vocabulary. This point of view is proved by the survey we conducted, in which university students and high school students took part (72 questionnaires in total). When analyzing the answers, the following results were obtained.

The respondents considered the use of words and phrases to be a mistake

colloquial character (reduced and emotionally colored vocabulary, jargon) even in texts that they themselves identified as colloquial. At the same time, the subjects considered it permissible to excessively use speech stamps and bureaucrats (“enclosing landings,” “based on all of the above”) even in a colloquial style, since (according to 60% of respondents) such book expressions indicate the “richness” of speech.

Chancellery manifests itself at different linguistic levels (the material for our research was also the texts of the media and the speeches of politicians, recordings of live spoken speech). In our opinion, the most vividly, in modern speech, the following features of the office are manifested:

Nominalization, i.e. replacing the verb with verbal nouns, participles, compound verb-nominal combinations. Nominalization was one of the features of the document-oriented Soviet language.

At the moment, such a replacement of verb forms with nominal ones is found in the speech of professional journalists, politicians, ordinary people (shooting down an airplane, lifting the blockade and normalizing the situation, carrying hand luggage, reducing the cost of a loan).

Verbosity (term by K.I. Chukovsky). The replacement of simple phrases and words with clerical ones is due to the fact that for many native speakers of the Russian language, the use of such expressions is a sign of correct book speech. Now such turns of speech are found mainly in official texts (persons of undetermined purpose, are engaged in labor activities), while in everyday life they have practically ceased to be used.

Lexical stamps of speech. They are easily perceived and assimilated by the listener, because they do not require deep comprehension, but at the same time they have a great influence on the formation of the communicant's values (servants of the people, take control of the situation, struggle for seats, rapid pace, advanced positions). Very often phrases with the word problem are used (problems with heating, family problems, material problems of Russians, problems of pensioners, the problem of "communal").

Sometimes lexical cliches "borrowed" from the Soviet era (party line, battle for the harvest) are used;

Otymennye pretexts (during our meetings with voters; due to the fact that ... due to the fact that Moscow and the region ...; due to their age; in the absence of a deficit; interrogated for dachas and income).

Stamping of the logical structure of official texts. The speeches of modern politicians are built according to a template (democratic rhetoric, praising the party, enthusiasm for their program, dissatisfaction with the current government), devoid of individuality and in this sense do not differ much from the speeches of political leaders of the Soviet era. This stereotype is characteristic not only of political speech. This is “a genro-specific feature of mass literature” [Bykov, Kupina: 30].

Thus, as the results of our observations show, the emergence and functioning of the office at different levels of the language in the Soviet and post-Soviet times can be explained by the following reasons:

The office exists in information societies, the authorities need it in order to manipulate the audience, to euphemize reality;

Many native speakers of the modern literary language do not know how to distinguish between the book language and the spoken language; when creating texts of oral spoken language, they take the linguistic features of book styles as a basis.

Modern carriers of the literary language are guided by the norms of the media, therefore, mistakes in the speech of announcers and public figures are perceived by them as a model.

Clerical is a common ailment, it penetrates everywhere. Translator Nora Gal compares it to a cancerous tumor that is growing to unprecedented proportions. Many, even having written a single sentence, manage to embed there some kind of stamp, official turnover. As if people have forgotten how to express their thoughts simply and clearly, in a living language.

There are an infinite number of examples of bureaucracy - from the already quite familiar

· he felt a sense of joy instead of he was happy

· movement in the city instead of moving around the city

· a lot of money instead of a lot of money

· compare instead of compare

· in the process of knitting, I rest instead of when I knit, I rest ...

To real verbal "monsters":

· at this time, active work is underway under the strict guidance ...

· we are fighting to improve the cleanliness of the streets

· due to the impossibility of fulfilling its obligations by the supplier ...

· process for establishing a well-functioning dispute settlement mechanism

· organization of work on food production

Official expressions in colloquial speech are especially depressing. The people who use them probably think this sounds solid, characterizing them as serious, educated people. For example, a young man to a girl's question "What are you doing?" replies: "At this time I work as a manager" or even better: "At the moment ..." instead of saying "now" or even without the circumstance of time. Probably, he believes that in this way he will make an indelible impression on the girl, seem smart, businesslike to her, that such a manner of expressing gives him charm. In fact, the word "given" in the meaning of "this" is used only in official papers or in scientific works, not in a mass magazine or newspaper, and even more so in a conversation, it has no place (there is nothing to say about fiction). The expression "at present" sounds just as ridiculous in conversation.

Or, for example, a teacher of Russian literature (!) Says: "I appreciate the presence of a sense of humor in a person." Really, if she said “I appreciate a sense of humor in a person,” someone would not understand that she appreciates the presence of a sense of humor, and not its absence? The word “presence” does not carry any semantic meaning, and the fact that it is used in relation to feeling, or in our case rather to a character trait, is completely strange: it’s like saying “the presence of love” or “the presence of kindness”. Very often in the speech of people there are these "presence" or "absence", "presence" ("the presence of free time", for example).

Quite often today the word “actively” is used: “actively works”, “is actively used”, “actively communicate”, “actively cooperates”, “is actively engaged in something”, “is actively fighting”. As if you can work and do something passively. You can say "actively resting", because there is also passive rest, but you cannot use the word "active" in relation to the verb, which itself means active action. In many cases, it is quite possible to dispense with the definition: why certainly "She is actively engaged in yoga" when you can simply say "She is doing yoga"? If you still need to emphasize the intensity of the action, you can put it this way: "widely used", "works hard", "communicate a lot", "fights zealously." But instead of many different synonyms, we have the only option for all occasions - "active". This is how the language becomes impoverished. When you have to write something, memory helpfully offers you a ready-made cliché - "actively engaged". And there is no need to make efforts, to look for the right word ... Perhaps this "actively" reflects modern realities: we can work in such a way that it is as if not to work, it seems to be engaged, but it seems not. Therefore, it became necessary to emphasize that a person is actively working, that is, a person is working.

How many times, while reading the text, we come across all sorts of "should be noted", "must be emphasized", "separately worth saying." Before saying something in essence, a person must certainly pile up a bunch of meaningless words.

One of the sources of contamination of the literary language are verbal cliches - words and expressions devoid of imagery, often and monotonously repeated without regard to context, impoverishing speech, filling it with formulaic turns, killing live presentation. A. N. Tolstoy rightly pointed out: “The language of ready-made expressions, cliches ... is so bad that it has lost the feeling of movement, gesture, image. The phrases of such a language slide through the imagination without touching the complex keyboard of our brain. "

Most often, speech stamps are created by the use of so-called clericalisms - standard formulas of official business speech, in certain genres of which their use is justified by tradition and the convenience of processing business papers.

Examples of bureaucrats: "event", "if available", "hereby certified" "notification", "should be"; “To provide assistance” (instead of “to help”), “hereby brought to your attention”; "According to what" with genus. case instead of the general literary dative; multicomponent nominal constructions with genus. case of the type "recovery of property damage from the employee", etc.

In contrast to the traditional use, when used inappropriately outside the framework of the official business style, the stylistic coloring of the bureaucracy can conflict with its environment; such use is considered to be a violation of stylistic norms. (Linguistic Encyclopedic Dictionary).

Such formations are used by writers as a means of characterizing a character in fiction, as a conscious, stylistic device. For example: "Without any agreement, this pig would in no way be allowed to steal the paper" (Gogol); "It is likewise forbidden to gouge out the eyes, bite off the nose ... take the head away ..." (Saltykov-Shchedrin); "... flying in and breaking glass with a crow ..." (Pisemsky); "The killing took place due to drowning" (Chekhov).

The use of linguistic means, assigned to the official business style, outside of this style leads to the clogging of the language - clerical.

Usually transmitted through written contacts. It is carried by the Office Ticker, the main habitat of which is the bureaucratic armchair. Disease "clerical virus" is mainly characteristic of people engaged in paperwork. The most susceptible to infection are adults of Homo Bureaucraticus.

The disease manifests itself in a confused, unintelligible structure of phrases, in ponderous and unnatural turns of speech. The colloquial speech of the sick loses its simplicity, liveliness and emotionality, becomes gray, monotonous and dry.

Treatment is immersion in a healthy language environment.

1.2 Speech stamps and stationery

The purity of speech is violated due to the use of the so-called speech stamps of hackneyed expressions with tarnished lexical meaning and worn out expressiveness, and clericalisms - words and expressions characteristic of official-business style texts used in live speech or in fiction (without a special stylistic task) ...

The writer L. Uspensky in the book "Culture of Speech" writes: "Stamps are different devices that are unchanged in shape and give many identical prints. Linguists and literary scholars have a" stamp "a turn of speech or a word that was once new and brilliant, like just issued a coin, and then repeated a hundred thousand times and became captured like a worn-out penny ": frost hardened, wide-open eyes, colorful (instead of flowery), with great enthusiasm, completely and so on.

The disadvantage of speech cliches is that they deprive speech of originality, liveliness, make it gray, boring, in addition, they create the impression that what is said (or written) is already known. Naturally, such a speech cannot attract and support the attention of the addressee. This is the reason for the need to fight cliches.

They are widely introduced into speech and bureaucracy; we often find them in oral presentations and in print, noting that they are not always necessary. Here is an example from the book by B.N. Golovin "How to Speak Correctly": "Let's remember what kind of" load "the word" question "gets in the speech of some speakers in all its variants: here and" illuminate the question "and" link the question ", and" substantiate the question "and" pose the question " , and "advance the issue", and "think over the issue", and "raise the issue" (and even to the "proper level" and "due height").

Everyone understands that the word "question" in itself is not so bad. Moreover, this word is necessary, and it has served and serves well our journalism and our business speech. But when in an ordinary conversation, in a conversation, in a live performance, instead of a simple and understandable word "told" people hear "highlighted the issue", and instead of "offered to exchange experience" "raised the question of exchange of experience," they become a little sad. " consider such phrases as this opinion (instead of this opinion), due attention, properly, I will focus on academic performance, focus on shortcomings, focus on absenteeism, etc. K.I. Chukovsky believed that clogging up speech with such words is his kind of illness, clerical.Already N.V. Gogol ridiculed expressions such as: before starting reading; tobacco addressed to the nose; to obstruct his intention; an event that has to be tomorrow. style: Andrei Bolkonsky wants to break out of the environment; An oak played a big role in starting a new life.

Thus, the following conclusion can be drawn. In oral and written speech, without any measure and need, phrases with derivative prepositions are used: from the side, along the line, in the section, for purposes, in action, in force, etc. However, in fiction, such constructions can be used with a special stylistic task , act as an artistic device.

Chapter 2. Practical analysis of the use of clericalisms in public speech

Replacing a verb with a verbal noun, participle, participle.

Here's an example with a verbal noun: "On Friday night over a beer with friends, talk about algorithms for increasing sales?" It sounds hard, but you can say this: "On Friday night over a beer with your friends, talk about how to increase sales?"

The verb is action, dynamics, life itself. A verbal noun motionless, frozen, dead - accordingly, your text will be dry and dull, tiresome for the reader. Verbs will help to revive it.

The abundance of participles and participles (breathing, admiring, turning around and smiling) make the text dissonant. The use of several participles and participles in one sentence at once creates a continuous hiss. The gerunds are almost never used in colloquial speech, and in writing you should be careful with them: they make the text heavier, make it cumbersome, confusing.

A pile of nouns in indirect cases, in particular a chain of nouns in the genitive case.

So in our example - "algorithms for increasing sales" - three nouns in the genitive case. And there are many more! These constructs make it harder to read. The sentence needs to be rearranged, in our case it is enough to use the verb again.

Another example: "the reduction in staff is attributable to efficiency gains through cost reductions and a reorganization of risk management." Judge for yourself whether such a sentence is easy to read. But its meaning can be conveyed as follows: "the reduction of staff is explained by the desire to increase efficiency by reducing costs and reorganizing risk management." The use of two verbs instead of verbal nouns (“increase” instead of “increase” and “reorganize” instead of “reorganize”) makes the sentence simple and straightforward.

The use of passive revolutions instead of active ones.

For example: “We see the company understands the problems” instead of “We see the company understands the problems”. A passive turnover is more bookish and more difficult to perceive than an active one. Active is alive and natural, and it is impossible to replace it with a passive one without good reason.

The use of foreign words instead of Russian, complex instead of simple and understandable.

For example, more and more often you hear from educated people the phrase “articulate your position” instead of “express your position”, “explain your position”.

In short, not the best, but the worst, are chosen from the language means. The richness of the language is being replaced by a limited number of ready-made stamps. Instead of reflecting life in all its diversity, such a language deadens everything that it touches.

Examples of writing from editorial practice

Let's consider examples of office writing from editorial practice, we present them with a corrected version, so that you can compare and see the difference.

Summing up all that has been said, I would like to focus on how to choose the right insurance conditions and company.

What should you know when choosing insurance conditions and a company? Boasts a rare, at the moment, phenomenon - the ability to operate frontal airbags in two modes. Boasts a rare feature today: frontal airbags can work in two modes.

The car has a pronounced tendency to skid.

The car skids easily.

I wanted a greater level of comfort, and this was one of the driving factors for changing the car.

I wanted more comfort, and this was one of the reasons to change the car.

This is partly due to the emergence and awareness of the numerous risks associated with our life.

The reason for this was the realization of the numerous risks to which we are exposed.

Often, many clients are not interested in the terms of payment of compensation when concluding an insurance contract, which subsequently leads to various kinds of conflicts between the client and the company.

When concluding an insurance contract, clients are often not interested in the terms of compensation, which further leads to conflicts between the client and the company.

However, despite the significant range of the accelerator pedal and the tachometer needle, we did not accelerate the car to a maximum of 197 km / h.

However, although the accelerator pedal was not pressed fully and the tachometer needle was not yet off scale, we did not accelerate the car to the maximum 197 km / h.

I am serviced at Nissan service stations, but, like most owners of this brand, I face a number of problems.

I am serviced at a Nissan service station, but, like most owners of this brand, I endure inconveniences.

However, the significant devaluation of the national currency at the end of 2008 created difficulties for clients in servicing their debt to banks.

However, the significant devaluation of the national currency at the end of 2008 made it difficult for clients to service their debt to banks.

For now, we remain optimistic about the improvement in bad loans by the end of the year.

We expect bad loans to improve by the end of the year

This significant headcount reduction is attributable to efficiency gains through cost savings and a reorganization of risk management, while continuing to lend to customers.

This significant reduction in staff is due to the desire to improve efficiency by reducing costs and reorganizing risk management, while the bank continues to lend to customers.

Although such a factor as the quality of the loan portfolio has not changed its downward trend over the past two years ...

Although the quality of the loan portfolio has not stopped deteriorating over the past two years ...

This assumption can be supported by the relatively stable economic situation last year and the latest data from the National Bank of Ukraine, which showed a significant decrease in the growth rate of bad loans in the banking system of Ukraine as a whole.

This assumption is based on the fact that last year the economic situation was relatively stable, and the latest data from the National Bank of Ukraine showed that the growth rate of bad loans in the banking system of Ukraine as a whole has significantly decreased.

Let's compare two more versions of the proposals:

Over the past ten years, Ethiopia has achieved achievements in eradicating such eternal enemies of humanity as ignorance, disease, poverty.

Over the past ten years, Ethiopia has made significant progress in the fight against ignorance, disease, poverty.

Hans Weber crashed on the line of a high-speed race as part of a motorcycle competition.

Hans Weber crashed during a high-speed race in motorcycle racing.

The exclusion of abbreviated prepositions from the text, as we can see, eliminates verbosity, helps to express a thought more concretely and stylistically correctly.

The use of speech stamps is usually associated with the influence of the official business style. Speech cliches are becoming widespread words and expressions with erased semantics and faded emotional coloring. So, in a variety of contexts, the expression begins to be used in a figurative meaning to get a residence permit (Each ball that flies into the net of the goal receives a permanent residence in the tables; Petrovsky's muse has a permanent residence in the hearts; Aphrodite entered the permanent exhibition of the museum - now she is registered in our city ).

The word to appear as universal is also often superfluous; This can be seen by comparing two versions of sentences from newspaper articles:

The use of chemicals for this purpose is very important.

For this purpose, chemicals must be used.

An important event is the commissioning of the production line in the Vidnovsky shop.

The new production line in the Vidnovsky shop will significantly increase labor productivity.

The unjustified use of linking verbs is one of the most common stylistic flaws in the specialized literature. However, this does not mean that a ban should be imposed on linking verbs, their use should be appropriate, stylistically justified.

Speech cliches, relieving the speaker of the need to look for the necessary, exact words, deprive speech of concreteness.

For example: The current season was held at a high organizational level - this proposal can be inserted into the report on hay harvesting, sports competitions, preparation of housing stock for winter, and grape harvest ...

Conclusion

The problematic of studying bureaucrats is not new. However, it attracts the attention of modern linguistic researchers who are stubbornly fighting for the purity of Russian speech.

The term "office" was introduced by Korney Chukovsky. He defined it as the style of language of officials and lawyers. The main task of bureaucrats is to create the appearance of a stormy activity, hence these loud, wordy expressions, behind which, in fact, nothing stands. They only admit a fog so that no one would guess what exactly is hidden behind these words, and often the bad is hidden, that which goes to the detriment of society. For bureaucrats, there are no living people, they think abstractly, which is reflected in their speech.

Only the chancellor has long gone beyond the limits of the bureaucratic environment and penetrated into all spheres. Very often on the websites of companies one can find text saturated with official expressions. In the opinion of those who wrote, this should probably give the impression of solidity, reliability, they say, we are not knitting brooms, but we are engaged in serious activity. But in fact, the reader gets bogged down in heavy constructions and cannot master even a short text.

In conclusion, it must be said that speech stamps, business vocabulary and phraseology themselves are needed in certain types of speech, however, one must constantly monitor that their use is appropriate so that stylistic errors do not arise.

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Application

Glossary of stationery

abroad, from abroad

imported (in the sense of foreign)

cultural (human)

Food)

young man, woman (as an address)

order table

mutual aid fund

quality mark

hero city

blacksmith

commission shop

branded, firmA (about "imported" things)))

white death, black gold

at the forefront

staging (about a film, a play)

car enthusiast (about the owner of the car)

intellectual

overseas hosts

American (and any other) military

spiritual ideals, spirituality

Our values

welfare of the people

cooperative

combine

meeting

citizen

policeman (in the 90s there was already a cop, garbage, etc.)

friendly

decent

health resort

In competent speech, there is no place for cluttering it cliches and bureaucracy. However, some people confuse the concept of “competently” and “officially”: speaking from the rostrum, answering an interview or composing a congratulation to a colleague, they allow the use of established expressions that are acceptable only within a certain area. This raises doubts about the competence and can damage the author's reputation.

What is bureaucracy and how to avoid the heap of unnecessary speech turns that make the speech impersonal? First, you need to define them.

What dictionaries say

The explanatory dictionary of the Russian language explains what bureaucracy is: lexical forms taken from the official business style. Efremova's dictionary adds: from documents and business papers. Earlier dictionaries do not contain this word - neither Ozhegov, nor Ushakov, nor, let alone Dal, encountered this phenomenon.

KI Chukovsky was the first to sound the alarm. He introduced the term "office" (by analogy with arthritis, bronchitis, colitis and other diseases). This is how the writer designated bureaucratic speech, replete with bureaucracy. In the twentieth century, the clerical language left the walls of institutions and poured into the masses, deforming the spoken and literary styles and distorting the Russian language.

Worst of all, the bureaucrats have taken over the media, breaking into people's homes from the TV screen. People began to consider this dead speech literate and taught the same to their children. It is distinguished by the excessive complexity of sentences, phrases, the replacement of verbs, the splitting of the predicate and the composition of chains of nouns.

Signs of clericalism

You can find out the office by lexical features:

1. It is filled with verbal nouns:

Taking, intercourse, disclosure, hijacking, gait, dash, collusion.

As a result, there is ambiguity and discrepancy.

2. The predicate splits:

Take food, show desire, provide assistance.

3. The use of an unreasonably large number of cases, mostly genitive:

This technique makes the syllable heavier and difficult to understand.

4. Passive turns:

The opinion was voiced, on the basis of which the decision was made.

This leads to the inevitable confusion of business and art style, clerical.

Book vocabulary and stationery: a comparison

The book style is subdivided into literary-journalistic, scientific and official-business. When words from one layer fall from another, this is considered a stylistic mistake, a discrepancy between the word or expression chosen by the author and the general style of the work.

For clarity, the table contains examples showing the relevance of the same forms in the business sphere and the inadmissibility of them in colloquial speech.

Book vocabulary	Stationery	Competent option
This is important for the city's budget.	Your response to my note, Maria, is important.	Your answer to my note is important to me, Maria.
The unit operates in the specified mode.	Vladimir slept and could not function in the prescribed mode.	Vladimir slept and violated the regime.
Ivanov is a member of the board of directors.	This toothbrush is mine.	This is my toothbrush.
Having thoroughly considered the proposal, the administration decided to implement it.	Having thoroughly examined the scrambled eggs, I decided to salt it.	Looking at the eggs, I salted them.

Specific terms

Some words especially clearly show what bureaucracy is. Since the names of organizations often consist of several words (Moscow State University of Economics, Statistics and Informatics), it is customary to abbreviate them. The same applies to words that are often used in a particular area. Abbreviations sometimes cause confusion in an uninitiated person:

KUM, KFKSTiMP, GAOPOTO, GAOU DOD OTSDYUTE, GOI, ZRAK, ChAO.
Illiquid, federal, confiscated, remake, scientific pop.

In colloquial speech, such words sound unnatural, but in a publicistic article they have to be deciphered. Sadly, some people still use official abbreviations instead of just a few words that are actually spoken.

Limited use of some words and phrases

Any contract for the lease, sale of real estate or a motor vehicle can serve as an explanation of what clericalism is. The text contains words and expressions that are typical only for business style.

The above, the following, will entail obtaining confirmation, in the event of force majeure, after this fact, in view of the above, in court, in accordance with applicable law.

There are especially many such words in the texts of business papers. They are transferred from the once compiled sample to new documents, terms coming from foreign language legal texts are added to them. Speaking in public, it is easier for a specialist to express thoughts using familiar vocabulary and speech patterns adopted in his profession.

This speech is immediately broadcast on television and commented on by analysts who do not bother looking for synonyms for business terms. The circle is closed: the man in the street begins to use clericalism in colloquial speech.

Stationery and speech stamps. The difference between a cliché and a stamp

The transfer of special terms to journalism occurs not only in the legislative sphere. Administrative activities, financial transactions, production management - all areas where the official style is adopted are the source of common clichés - the language standards adopted in the business world:

Informed sources, public sector employees, branches of the Russian government, commercial structures.

In a newspaper article, these words become clerical. To them are added stereotypical phrases that are used everywhere:

At this time interval, for the current period, in the near future, it is not possible.

Such words can easily be replaced with synonyms "now", "soon", "impossible". They are used to communicate with bureaucrats, as they create the appearance of a business style. There are a lot of such expressions, but a writer who is responsible for the language will not use them. As well as speech cliches - hackneyed expressions that set the teeth on edge:

Rotary-winged machine, black gold, big brother, people in white coats, thunderous applause, avaricious men's tears, burning eyes, iron character, happy childhood.

Once it was new, but over time it lost its expressiveness. Such combinations have long turned into templates, there is not even a trace of their former expressiveness in them.

Inadmissibility of bureaucracy in literature

When a writer puts vernacular and clericalism into the lips of his heroes, he gives them a speech characteristic. This technique was used by M. Zoshchenko, transferring the language of the streets to the pages of books. But when the official business style penetrates the words of the author, and in all seriousness, a catastrophe occurs. The Russian language is dying.

When an employee is instructed to compose a text for a congratulatory address, he can suffer with it, like a Chekhov accountant with a report on the anniversary of a bank, not knowing how to choose the words. Examples of stationery in such a congratulation:

Currently, the rich experience of employees who have crossed the fifty-year milestone is important.

Continuously holding this post, he kept watch, despite his failing health.

We wish you positive changes on your well-deserved rest.

Everything could be said in a simpler and warmer way:

The accumulated experience of employees of your age is very valuable for the organization.
He didn't quit his job even when he got sick.
All the best to you and new discoveries in retirement.

Conclusion

It may seem strange, but the study of the varieties of clericalisms does not exclude their use by the author in his articles. The principle is simple: not having the right model, you can't learn to do the right thing. Reading fiction, a writer enriches his vocabulary and begins to understand what clericalism is in the Russian language. Examples of constructing phrases by the classics are a model that deserves to be followed.

The more attention you pay to such reading, the better and better quality articles will be obtained from the pen of a beginner. And style weeds don't even come to mind.

Lexical and phraseological clericalisms include words and phrases that have a typical color for the official business style ( the presence, in the absence, in order to avoid, reside, withdraw, the above, takes place etc.). Their use makes speech expressionless (If there is a desire, much can be done to improve the working conditions of workers; Currently, there is a lack of teaching staff).

As a rule, you can find many options for expressing thoughts, avoiding bureaucratic issues. For example, why would a journalist write: There is a negative side to a marriage in the activities of an enterprise, if I can say: It is bad when an enterprise releases a marriage; Marriage is unacceptable in work; Marriage - it is a great evil that must be fought; It is necessary to prevent defects in production; We must finally stop producing defective products !; You can't put up with marriage! A simple and specific formulation has a stronger impact on the reader.

The clerical coloring of speech is often given by verbal nouns formed with the help of suffixes -ni-, -ani- and etc. (identifying, finding, taking, blowing up, closing) and non-fatty (sewing, hijacking, day off). The clerical shade is aggravated by the prefixes not-, under- (non-detection, underperformance). Russian writers often parodied the syllable, "decorated" with such bureaucracy [The case of gnawing a plan thereof with mice(Hertz.); The case of the arrival and breaking of glass by a crow(Pis.); Announcing to the widow Vanina that she had glued the sixty-kopeck mark ...(Ch.)].

Verbal nouns do not have categories of tense, type, mood, voice, person. This narrows their expressive possibilities in comparison with verbs. For example, such a sentence is devoid of precision: On the part of the head of the farm, V.I.Shlyk, a negligent attitude towards milking and feeding the cows was shown. You might think that the manager did not milk and feed the cows poorly, but the author only wanted to say that The head of the farm V.I.Shlyk did nothing to facilitate the work of the milkmaids, to prepare feed for the livestock. The inability to express the meaning of the voice with a verbal noun can lead to ambiguity in the type construction professor's approval(Professor approves or claim?), I love singing(I love sing or listen when they sing!).

In sentences with verbal nouns, the predicate is often expressed in a passive participle or reflexive verb, this deprives the action of activity and enhances the clerical coloring of speech [At the end of the acquaintance with the sights, tourists were allowed to photograph them(better: Tourists were shown the sights and allowed to photograph them)].

However, not all verbal nouns in the Russian language belong to the official business vocabulary, they are diverse in stylistic coloring, which largely depends on the peculiarities of their lexical meaning and word formation. Verbal nouns with the meaning of a person have nothing to do with bureaucracy. (teacher, self-taught, confusion, bully), many nouns with the meaning of action (running, crying, playing, washing, shooting, bombing).

Verbal nouns with book suffixes can be divided into two groups. Some are stylistically neutral (meaning, name, excitement), many of them -nie changed in -nye, and they began to denote not an action, but its result (cf. baking pies - sweet cookies, cherry jam - Cherry jam). Others retain a close connection with verbs, acting as abstract names for actions, processes (acceptance, non-identification, non-admission). It is precisely such nouns that are most often inherent in clerical coloration, only those who have received a strict terminological meaning in the language (drilling, spelling, abutting).

The use of clericalisms of this type is associated with the so-called "splitting of the predicate", that is, the replacement of a simple verbal predicate by a combination of a verbal noun with an auxiliary verb having a weakened lexical meaning (instead of complicates -leads to complication). So, they write: This leads to complication, confusion of accounting and increased costs, and it is better to write: This complicates and confuses accounting, increases costs.

However, in the stylistic assessment of this phenomenon, one should not go to the extreme, rejecting any cases of using verb-nominal combinations instead of verbs. In book styles, the following combinations are often used: took part instead of participated, gave instructions instead of pointed out etc. In the official business style, verb-nominal combinations have been fixed declare gratitude, accept for execution, impose a penalty(in these cases, the verbs thank, fulfill, collect inappropriate), etc. The scientific style uses such terminological combinations as visual fatigue occurs, self-regulation occurs, transplantation is performed etc.

The following expressions function in the journalistic style: workers went on strike, there were clashes with the police, an attempt was made on the minister and so on. In such cases, one cannot do without verbal nouns and there is no reason to consider them clerical.

The use of verbal-nominal combinations sometimes even creates conditions for speech expression. For example, the combination take an ardent part more capacious in meaning than a verb participate. The definition with a noun allows you to give a verbal-nominal combination an exact terminological meaning (cf .: to help - provide emergency medical care). The use of a verbal-nominal combination instead of a verb can also contribute to the elimination of the lexical polysemy of verbs (cf .: give beep - to hum). The preference for such verb-nominal combinations of verbs, of course, is beyond doubt; their use does not harm the style, but, on the contrary, makes speech more effective.

1. Burbot spawning occurs in January-February.
2. The duty service is strenuously monitoring the consumption of electricity.
1. In January-February, burbot spawns.
2. The on-call service strictly controls the consumption of electricity.
3. ... Viewers will see how the table rises and falls, how it opens and closes

ramp.

The influence of the official business style often explains the unjustified use of abusive prepositions: along the line, in section, in part, in deed, in force, for purposes, in the address, in the area, in the plan, at the level, at the expense of and others. They have become widespread in book styles, and under certain conditions, their use is stylistically justified. However, infatuation with them often damages the presentation, making the syllable heavier and giving it a clerical color. This is partly due to the fact that abusive prepositions usually require the use of verbal nouns, which leads to stringing of cases. For example: By improving the organization of paying off salary and pension arrears, improving the culture of customer service, turnover in state and commercial stores should increase- the accumulation of verbal nouns, many of the same case forms made the sentence heavy, cumbersome. To correct the text, it is necessary to exclude the abbreviated preposition from it, if possible, replace the verbal nouns with verbs. Let's say this edit option: To increase the turnover in state and commercial stores, it is necessary to pay salaries on time and not delay the pension of citizens, as well as to improve the culture of customer service.

Some authors use abbreviated prepositions automatically, without thinking about their meaning, which is partly still preserved in them. For example: Due to the lack of materials, construction has been suspended(as if someone foresaw that there would be no materials, and therefore the construction was suspended). Incorrect use of abusive prepositions often leads to illogical statements.

Let's compare two versions of the proposals:

1. Achievements have been made in Ethiopia over the past ten yearsto eradicatesuch eternal enemies of humanity as ignorance, disease, poverty.
2. On the line of high-speed arrival

within the frameworkmotorcycle race Hans Weber crashed.

1. Over the past ten years, Ethiopia has made significant progress in the fight against ignorance, disease, poverty.
2. Hans Weber crashed during a high-speed race in motorcycle racing.

The use of speech stamps is usually associated with the influence of the official business style. Speech cliches are becoming widespread words and expressions with erased semantics and faded emotional coloring. So, in a variety of contexts, the expression begins to be used in a figurative sense get a residence permit (Each ball that enters the goal net receives a permanent registration in the tables; Petrovsky's muse has a constant registration in the hearts; Aphrodite entered the permanent exhibition of the museum - now it is registered in our city).

Any frequently repeated speech means can become a stamp, for example, stereotyped metaphors, definitions that have lost their figurative power due to constant reference to them, even hackneyed rhymes (i tears - roses). However, in practical stylistics, the term "speech stamp" has received a narrower meaning: this is the name for stereotypical expressions that have a clerical coloration.

Among the speech cliches that have arisen as a result of the influence of the official business style on other styles, one can distinguish, first of all, stereotyped turns of speech: at this stage, at this segment ere me, today, emphasized with all the acuteness and so on. As a rule, they do not add anything to the content of the utterance, but only clog the speech: In this period of time, a difficult situation has developed with the elimination of debts to supplier enterprises; At present, the payment of wages to miners has been taken under unremitting control; At this stage, the spawn of the crucian carp goes well and so on. Excluding the highlighted words will not change anything in the information.

Speech stamps also include universal words that are used in a variety of, often too broad, indefinite meanings ( question, event, series, conduct, unfold, separate, specific etc.). For example, the noun question, acting as a universal word, it never indicates what is being asked about (Especially nutritional issues in the first 10-12 days are important; The issues of timely collection of taxes from enterprises and commercial structures deserve great attention.). In such cases, it can be painlessly excluded from the text (cf .: Nutrition in the first 10-12 days is especially important; It is necessary to collect taxes from enterprises and commercial structures in a timely manner).

Word appear, as universal, also often superfluous; This can be seen by comparing two versions of sentences from newspaper articles:

1. The use of chemicals for this purpose is very important.
1. For this purpose, chemicals must be used.
2. The new production line in the Vidnovsky shop will significantly increase labor productivity.

Cross stamps include paired words, or satellite words; the use of one of them necessarily prompts the use of the other (cf .: event - carried out, scope- broad, criticism - sharp, problem - unresolved, overdue etc.). The definitions in these pairs are lexically incomplete, they generate speech redundancy.

Speech cliches, relieving the speaker of the need to look for the necessary, exact words, deprive speech of concreteness. For example: This season was held at a high organizational level- this proposal can be inserted into the report on hay harvesting, and on sports competitions, and on the preparation of housing stock for the winter, and on the grape harvest ...

Language standards should be distinguished from speech stamps. Linguistic standards are called ready-made, reproducible in speech means of expression used in journalistic style. Unlike the cliché, "the standard ... does not evoke a negative attitude, since it has clear semantics and expresses thought sparingly, contributing to the speed of information transfer." The language standards include, for example, such combinations that have become stable: Public sector workers, employment services, international humanitarian aid, commercial structures, law enforcement agencies, branches of the Russian government, according to informed sources,- phrases like household service (nutrition, health, rest etc.). These speech units are widely used by journalists, since it is impossible in each specific case to invent new means of expression.

Comparing the journalistic texts of the period of "Brezhnev stagnation" and the 90s, one can note a significant reduction in clericalism and speech stamps in the language of newspapers and magazines. Stylistic "companions" of the command-bureaucratic system left the scene in the "post-communist time". Now the bureaucracy and all the beauties of the bureaucratic style are easier to find in humorous works than in newspaper materials. This style is wittily parodied by Mikhail Zhvanetsky:

A resolution on further deepening the expansion of constructive measures taken as a result of consolidation to improve the state of all-round interaction of all conservation structures and to ensure an even greater intensification of the order of the working people of all masses on the basis of the rotational priority of the future normalization of relations between the same workers on their own order.

The accumulation of verbal nouns, chains of the same case forms, speech stamps firmly "block" the perception of such utterances that cannot be comprehended. Our magazine

Nalistics successfully overcame this "style", and it "decorates" only the speech of individual speakers and officials in government agencies. However, while they are in their leading positions, the problem of combating clericalism and speech cliches has not lost its relevance.

In the new theater building ... before the eyes of the spectator, the table will be raised and lowered, the ramp will open and close.
Significant is the event for the commissioning of the production line in the Vidnovsky shop.
See: V. G. Kostomarov Russian language on the newspaper page. - M., 1971.
Kozhin A. N., Krylova O. K., Odintsov V. V. Functional types of Russian speech. -WITH. 114.

Psychology of the editor

Speech stamps and bureaucracy - what are they?

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There are special requirements for formal business style. It is necessary to select words and adhere to the required manner of writing. But the main thing to remember is that any information must be alive.
Bureaucracy is a terrible enemy for the author.

Clerical is a speech filled with verbal cliches, formulaic formulas in an official business style. She looks lifeless, devoid of emotional color and sincerity. In this language, it is difficult to convey mood and guide the reader to take any action (purchases, subscriptions, commenting on an article). Such a language cannot create
Stamps and bureaucrats are “enemies” of Russian speech.

Stationery

Clericalism is a word, phrase or speech turnover, which is characteristic when writing official and business texts, but used in an unusual place for it (artistic presentation, oral speech).

In literature, instead of specific words, we use artistic expressions,. We change the word road to roadbed. If such a turnover is used when writing artwork, then this is clericalism, but in official business language - on the contrary.

Due to the excessive use of clericalisms, the language becomes not expressive and ponderous.
The pretentious official construction does not make sense, it can be removed from the text. The essence of the presentation will remain clear, clericalism is replaced with another word or phrase that suits the style and influences.

We get rid of clericalism and stamps in texts

Types of stationery

In the Russian language, there is a classification that teaches them to recognize and eliminate them in time.

1. Verbal noun

It contains the suffixes -eni-, -ani- (taking, calculating, reconciliation, coercion), as well as nouns without suffixes (time off, sewing).

Sometimes the authors add even more to the tone of the bureaucracy. To do this, they use the prefixes not-, under- (underperformance). Stationery does not have a category of time, kind, mood, pledge, face. Their expressiveness and comparison with verbs are narrowed.

Example 1:
Identifying unwanted errors was his main job.
Feeding and milking cows came first among workers in the early days.

Stationery weighs down the syllable. The sentence becomes verbose and monotonous.
A verbal noun can be of two types:

Stylistically neutral (understanding, walking, shooting) The end of the word with "nie" - indicates that the action is still going on. If we transform “nie-” into “nye-”, then we get the final result.
Nouns closely related to the verbs that originated them. This is the name of a specific action or process (writing, reading, reviewing). Such nouns have bad clerical coloration. Exceptions include strict terminological meaning (treatment, spelling).

2. Otmenny preposition

The official business style is expanded due to the fact that certain words are found, for example: due, in force, with a goal, at the level.

They can be used in moderation, but excessive accumulation can give the text an unwanted clerical coloration. A distinctive feature of bureaucrats is that they are associated in the text with the previous type. They cannot live without each other.

Example 2:
Due to improved weather conditions.
Through the adoption of the law.
For the purpose of assimilation.

Otmennye prepositions are harmoniously combined with verbal nouns.
If we use such a bundle at the beginning of the presentation, then we will draw all the clericalism next, as well. You need to carefully use phrases in the text, such words are a real magnet for office vocabulary.

3. Patterned speech turnover

This type of clericalism is associated with a speech stamp. Widespread formulaic speech patterns that have penetrated fiction from the official-business style: today, at this stage, at present, and others.

Example 3:
To date, all construction work is proceeding according to plan.

The proposal carries the desired meaning without any turnover. And so it is clear that this is the present time. According to such criteria, it is possible to exclude other words that are in widespread use.

Speech stamps

The use of speech stamps in the text deprives it of clear, specific and individual properties. Sometimes they make it difficult for the reader to grasp the meaning.

The template turnovers change every year, the old ones are replaced with new ones. This replacement must be constantly monitored so as not to allow modern, but empty sentences in your text.

Speech stamps are an incomplete word or expression, cliched with unnecessary phrases. They are often used in oral speech, which makes it meaningless.

If you use a stereotypical or formulaic word, then live speech quickly becomes dull and inexpressive. Very often, storytellers do not consider context.

You can often find speech cliches in the media and journalism. TV presenters and journalists believe that if they use popular phrases, their article will become more interesting, it will be. But this is a delusion.
Stamps in journalism, examples: ... time will tell, wait and see, there is a place to be.

Speech stamps and their types

Speech stamps are divided into several types.

A universal word used in various obscure and indefinite meanings. Because of them, the specifics in the oral or written presentation are lost, as well as information is lost.
Paired words used in a spoken text, but they do not act as phraseological units. Such stamps include stereotyped thoughts, for example: thunderous applause.
A fashionable word, phrase, phrase that spreads, but over time, due to frequent use, lose its originality and become a template.

The property and characteristics that indicate the uniqueness of the object, over time, pass into speech stamps.

Controversial issues about speech stamps

Stamps and bureaucracy and their conditionality.
Some people think that they should be completely abandoned, while others - the other way around. The latter are convinced that cliches and bureaucracy add modernity to speech. We are completely satisfied with the simple repetition of speech phrases, which automate the speech process and facilitate communication.

The main goal is to save mental work. Therefore, only you can decide how to talk.

Why are speech stamps dangerous?

There are several reasons why you should abandon the template phrases:

Speech is deprived of specific thoughts and ideas.
The conversation becomes dull and boring.
People using such expressions become uninteresting to the interlocutor.
People who use such phrases in their speech, over time, lose the originality of thought, they also lose

As you can see, the use of a turnover with verbal nouns (instead of a simple predicate) in such cases is inappropriate - it generates verbosity and burdens the syllable.

The exclusion of abbreviated prepositions from the text, as we can see, eliminates verbosity, helps to express a thought more concretely and stylistically correctly.

The word to appear as universal is also often superfluous; This can be seen by comparing two versions of sentences from newspaper articles:

The unjustified use of linking verbs is one of the most common stylistic flaws in the specialized literature. However, this does not mean that a ban should be imposed on linking verbs.

In sentences with verbal nouns, the predicate is often expressed in a passive participle or reflexive verb, this deprives the action of activity and enhances the clerical coloring of speech

As you can see, the use of a turnover with verbal nouns (instead of a simple predicate) in such cases is inappropriate - it generates verbosity and burdens the syllable.

The exclusion of abbreviated prepositions from the text, as we can see, eliminates verbosity, helps to express a thought more concretely and stylistically correctly.

As weed words most often they are:

19. Richness of speech. Word formation as a source of speech wealth.

In this article we will talk about such a linguistic concept as "clericalism". Examples, basic properties and scope of this will be considered by us in particular detail.

In Russian, bureaucracy is referred to such a language group as speech stamps. Therefore, let's figure out for a start what this phenomenon is.

What are speech stamps

Let's start by looking at the most common mistakes that are made in both writing and communication.

In russian language? Examples of

Signs of clericalism

Now let's define the signs of such words and consider examples.

Stationery is the words of the official business style, however, besides this, they have a number of purely linguistic features. Among them are:

The use of non-fixative (hijacking, sewing, day off); suffix (taking, revealing, bloating, finding).
Replacement of a compound nominal predicate of a simple verb (splitting of the predicate). For example: show desire- instead of wish, make a decision- instead of decide to help- instead of to help.
The use of abominable prepositions. For example: in part, along the line, in force, in the address, in the context, in the region, at the expense, in the plan, in the case, at the level.
Stringing of cases, usually genitive. For example, conditions necessary to raise the level of culture of the population of the region.
Replacing active revolutions with passive ones. For example, active turnover we installed- to passive the establishment was carried out by us.

Why is it forbidden to abuse clericalism?

For example: after short-term precipitation fell in the form of rain, a rainbow shone over the reservoir in all its glory.
The ambiguity that verbal nouns generate. For example, the phrase “professor's statement” can be understood both as “professors assert” and as “professor asserts”.
Verbosity, weighting of speech. For example: due to the improvement in the level of service, the turnover in commercial and state stores should significantly increase.

Usually journalists tend to use stamps. Therefore, in the journalistic style, such expressions are especially common.

What words refer to clericalism

So, bureaucracy can be characterized by:

Archaic solemnity: named, the aforementioned, collect, the bearer of this, it is necessary, to demand, as such.
At the same time, bureaucracy can be everyday businesslike: to speak(in meaning to discuss), hear, progress, puzzle, specifics, developments.
Nouns formed from verbs with the following suffixes give speech an official business coloration: - ut, -at, -ani, -ni: beginning, taking, finding; non-fixative: time off, hijacking, sewing, hiring, supervision; prefixed words under-, not-: non-detection, non-detection, under-fulfillment, non-admission.
In addition, a number of nouns, participles, adverbs, linking verbs and adjectives are strictly related to the business sphere of communication. For example: party, customer, client, principal, owner, person, memo, victim, vacant, outgoing, immediately, gratuitously, be, be, be.
A number of official words are distinguished by their official business coloration: to the address, at the expense, on the basis of and so on. For example: according to the agreement, in connection with the termination of the agreement, in case of refusal to comply with the agreement, as a result of research etc.
Such turnovers include the following compound names: food products, law enforcement agencies, vehicle, budgetary sphere, diplomatic relations.

When is it appropriate to use the term "clericalism"

Stationery as a stylistic device

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